1. All the drawings sucks
2. The pages basically go from SHITTY TO KINDA GOOD THEN BAK TO SHITTY
3. i can never decided whether i wanna just post it ink'd, sketch'd, or color'd... so u get all 3
4. don't take this srsly....... cus im not taking it srsly and as much as i wanna make it NICE.. i can't.. because i can never keep a promise especially if it is "i promise that this will get better n the art won't be as bad" look wut happened, its horrible.
5. grammar suks man